Friday, November 18, 2005

Women




And i watched from the peephole to paradise,
as they bathed in dark pools,
black water running down
their black back,
pulled me from hell to a place more convoluted,
and i welcomed it,
for lust has its own charm.

9 comments:

L>T said...

whoo! I liked that. I think I will read it to my husband tonight. He needs an introduction to poetry. Your are the best.

medusa said...

well, that was some reco wasnt it?

uglygirl said...

yes it was!
so you have rae my whole blog?
blush blush

medusa said...

i meant to say this but forgot, i totally loved, loed loved loved "big mouth and ugly girl"

mizfit said...

hmm...u r turning out to be quite a poetess. knowing u personally, i think there is lot more to come n i'm waiting.

serendipiduous said...

long live the kharda nymphs...of powdered patches and sleeveless nighties fame...

L>T said...

Shona, I miss your smiling face & the LUV that is not so serious that it pains me.
To be accepted as a soul-mate that lives across the water & across time.
This is the life that I can live.
Not so close to be painful or so distant to be lost.

L>T said...

U. girl, forgive me for my stupid poem, I was feeling melancholy.

uglygirl said...

am feeling unwell. what you melancholic about?
no reason i guess. one just does.