so this is how hope dies,
someone mistakes it for love,
gets angry,
stamps it,
and kills it.
this is how love dies i guess,
someone sees it as a curb,
takes a knife,
and wounds it,
love bleeds to death,
and now with no hope
and no love,
someone is very upset.
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someone, however, liked it
make that two who really liked it! ciao babes
perhaps the last line can be editted, still its good.
saying that just on a literary level, otherwise its good the way it is.
ouch! U.girl, tragic. the visual effects of the poem, very compelling.
i love the last line only.
the last line is the essence of the poemlet.
i guess you dint get it!
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