Thursday, April 27, 2006

attempts at haiku (the city me and me)


sound at back window
and life that stretchaes beyond
both seem inviting.

the room is stifling
the furnitures and me,
yet the door is shut.

music streams downwards
hits my intolerant ears
and spills away free

5 comments:

L>T said...

I like it! it puts me in a mood.

I have a picture of my first born on my blog. I think you'd like her.

L>T said...

cute avatar, btw. LOOk! i have a new one, too!! (courtesy of gyrobro)

Sol said...

that was seamless!

tell us more ;)

L>T said...

Please change your post, please!!!
Shona.

medusa said...

ok new post!!!!! now!!!!!!