I once knew a girl,
Who had,
Bright bright eyes,
Rich black hair,
And soil coloured skin.
I once knew a girl
Who would
Dance in the rains,
And then dry her hair,
Just outside my window.
This girl
Would sit at her window,
As I sat at mine
And hum and whistle,
And sob and sigh.
And this girl,
Cried all night,
And prayed all dawn,
Right outside my window.
I once knew this girl,
Who pined all summer
for the girl in the opposite window
A girl who didn’t seem to know she existed.
I once knew a girl
Who live in the house beside mine
And our windows spoke to each other,
Though we never did.
And this girl,
I was told,
Wrote poems about a girl
She once knew.
8 comments:
very nice poem. sorry, i read your comment to my post just a few minutes ago because i had the wrong settings. thanks and do comment often!
good post.. thank u for dropping by the other day.. keep your comments coming..
love the inversion technique
loved it loved it loved it
This poem kicks major buttocks!
I LOVE it!
The two girls loved each other, huh? But never talked. How sad. Such is life.
I have a funny new post...I think you might like it.
this had me humming,"mere samne wali khidki main ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai..."
loved the poem, of course!
thanks you guys. i like this poem of mine too somehow!
Very nice as usual. I love reading your poems.
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