Monday, July 31, 2006

when you hurt me

fat little raindrops fall from my soul,
and collect somewhere
in the the crevices
of your skin and flesh.

and you hit me last night,
hard and surreptitious

and i watched with awe
the cold silent fist
making contact with my virgin lips.

the puddle of my sadness
creeps through the floor i sit on.
and you sit closeby.
just as wet
just as hard
and i watch with awe.

7 comments:

L>T said...

[[[[hugs]]]] from mama tart.

uglygirl said...

i love you yuo know.
thanks for the mail.
i dint reply yet, but do tell me about that.

Starry Lady said...

hey... I seem to have missed something, but I wanted to say,

this is a beautiful poem. Very real... brings up memories.

just another girl said...

I have been reading your blog for ages but never commented. It was fantastic when i read that you had found love and now....well let me not go that way. Hope things work out the way you want them to. And in case you haven't been told....you are one sexy lady.

uglygirl said...

Oh!


Thanks starry lady, i love this poem too. gah!!

and just another girl....who are you?

hari said...

nice poem!
had to do exact search on google to chck if you really wrote it! no just kiddin.. know you really write well. :)

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